Sketch example

ok so i was looking over some of the sketches in one of my books and i saw this. i was a little surprised about the looseness of the sketches. they were so loose they came up with some cool interesting characters. or some design that stood out. i want you guys to try to do the same. but clean it up a little bit more. and try making these presentable. i don't wanna see just sketches on a page without a template. i think audrey lee in the jr class has some good examples of good layout. i know disney loved it. heres an example http://audreyjl.blogspot.com/

as for the images i posted above, the red is where i marked to show you guys an example of what i'm talking about. the sketches are loose but the idea is there, and when they go to flush it out they start to make more sense with the anatomy. but still try to give it that loose feel to it. try it out.